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Friday, August 21, 2020

BAD COMMENTS AND GOOD COMMENTS

 BAD COMMENTS AND GOOD COMMENTS

Here is bad comments and good comments he bad comments have bad comment at the end of the text and the good comments have god comment at the end of the text

The Newspaper

Dear Miss Jordan, Our blog is awesome!!! I love our grade!!!! I went for a swim in the pool today. I am going to a party tomorrow. I  parties. From Janelove. Bad comment


About Leopold

Dear 2KJ and 2KM,

I just visited your “about” page and learnt about your town, Leopold. It looks like a great place to live. What are your favourite activities to do in the town of Leopold?

From Luke. Good comment



About Leopold

Dear 2KJ

I like your blog. I live in Leopold on Ash Road. My phone number is 52501111

From Billy King. 


Postcard Project

Dear 2KM,

The Postcard Project sounds great. It is terrific that you are learning about the world. Have you ever sent postcards before? Where in the world would you like to visit?

Best wishes,

Jo

Good comment


About Leo

Leo is grate he is so so so cute i wood lik to hav a lion lik Leo at my house

From John. Bad comment


Dress up Day

Dear Mrs Morris on LPS day I dressed up as a scientist I wore a white coat and funny glasses I liked Sam’s costume because he dressed up as a doctor LPS day was really fun because I liked looking at everyones costumes from Bob. Bad comment


Healthy Choices

Dear Miss Jordan,

I am really enjoying learning about food this term. It is very important to eat lots of fruit and vegetables. What are your favourite fruits and vegetables to eat? I enjoy strawberries and carrots.

From Sally. Good comment


Last day of term 1

I can’t wait for the holydays cos I am going to Sydney wif my family.i hope I get lots off easter eggs.from kate. Bad comment


About our Teachers

Dear Mrs Morris,

I am really enjoying blogging with our students this year. What are your favourite things about having a class blog?

From Miss Jordan. Good comment


Blogging Buddies

Dear 2KJ and 2KM,

The quad blogging project is a wonderful idea! Mrs Yollis, Mr Salsich and Mrs McKenzie are all fantastic bloggers. What blogging tips do you have for your students?

From Mel. Good comment

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